Naruto-OC-Critique

Disclaimer: I do not own One piece, Bleach, Naruto, or Mortal Kombat Chapter One: Konoha Aizen, Jade, Naruto, Sakura and Kakashi heads back to Konoha village. They headed to the entrance. Which he sees a big gate opened wide. Both of the leaf ninjas named Kotetsu and Izumo saw Team Seven and the magical warrior but sees an uninvited guest along as well. "What Aizen! You're not supposed to be here in this village!" Kotetsu shouted as he sees Aizen. "Don't worry, Jade had put seal on him that he won't able to use Kido in the village. He'll only use it when he's outside of the village or on missions with us." Kakashi explained. "Well okay. He may enter this village as long he doesn't cause any trouble. You got that Aizen!" Kotetsu shouted as Aizen didn't say a word but understands it. Jade, Aizen and her team enters in Konoha village Everyone in the village were giving glares at the traitor and whispering at each other. Aizen knows that everyone completely hates him for betraying

Author's Notes: This story in Dark Phoenix Jade II. That Aizen found Jade and what does he want from her? Disclaimer: I do not own One piece, Bleach, Naruto and Mortal Kombat. I only own is my ocs. This Fanfiction is rated T but rated M in the future chapters. Prologue: Reunion A eighteen years old magical warrior named Jade was sleeping on her black cloak while wearing her Dark Phoenix outfit. She was on a mission with Sakura, Naruto, and Kakashi to hunt down Hollows. "Jade wake up." A voice replied which she recognize. "Fennikusu. What is it?" Jade asked. "I felt something very dangerous around here. You should look around and see who it is." Fennikusu replied inside of Jade. The magical warrior gets up and grabs her magical staff She saw a tall man who wearing a black leather suit, white small cloak with brown hair with brown eyes and still wearing a bandages that was covering his eye. He is holding a sword. "Hello Jade." The man replied. "Aizen." Jade replied. "Oh God

I do not own Naruto, and One piece Chapter 4: Xenomorph warrior Dagger Jade, Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura are chasing a creature that they're trying to catch it. They made sure to hide until Naruto caught it. The creature that they chased down was a cat. The cat began to screech and scratch Naruto at the same time. Jade transformed back into her normal outfit. They headed back to Konoha village where they brought the cat who is named Tora. The woman who owns her began to hug her tightly. "Geez no wonder why that cat ran away from her." Jade replied. "Same thing." Sakura replied as The third Hokage looks through the list to find something for Team 7 but Naruto began to complain that he wants to have a real mission. So Hiruzen gave them a C rank Mission. "Oh by the way. Plus Fukai told me that someone to keep an eye on Jade on her first mission. Which the two are here." Hiruzen replied as the door opens revealing to be a man named Tazuna and a seventeen year old girl she has black

I do not own Naruto and One piece Chapter 3: The test Around 5 am Jade, Sasuke, Naruto and Sakura are at the training grounds and waits for Kakashi to be here. They waited as the sun rises. "What is taking him so long? He's supposed to be here" Jade shouted as she was getting impatient. "Geez Jade is more scarier than me." Sakura replied as Kakashi sees them. "Morning everyone. Ready for your training." Kakashi replied as the four gets mad at him. "Hey you're late!" They shouted. "Well a black cat was blocking my path so I took a different direction." Kakashi answered as the two groaned while Sasuke and Jade didn't say anything. "Alright let's started." Kakashi replied he sets a clock in front of them. "Here we go. It is set at noon." Kakashi replied as he holds three bells on his hand. "You're first task is simple. You guys just have to take these from me that is all. If you can't get them by noon. You'll go without lunch and you're be tied to those logs while I eat my lunch

I do not own Naruto, One piece, Bleach and Mortal Kombat Chapter 2: A new Mentor and Team Morning shined at Jade woke up in her bed in her bedroom. She realized she was going to late for school. "Oh crap. I'm going to be late!" Jade shouted as she heads in the bathroom door and gets dress into her outfit. She ran downstairs and out of her two building house. "Going to school." Jade replied as her other magical friends sees her leave. "Back home after when school is finished." Fukai replied as Jade exits the house. "I hope she's doing fine in school?" Minako asked. "Minako, you know Jade will be fine." Dagger answered. Jade ran to the academy where everyone is at. She sees everyone sitting in their desks. So the girl sat down and getting out her book of magic. "Excuse me is there anyone sitting her?" The blue haired girl asked. "No there's no one sitting here." Jade answered as the girl sat down next to her. "BTW I'm Hinata Hyuga." Hinata replied. "And I'm Nico Jade." Jade

I do not own Naruto, and One piece Author's notes: I began to start rewatching Naruto after missing Shipudden and the movies that I hadn't watch for a long time. Chapter 1: Enter Dark Phoenix As five girls wearing cloaks at night stands at a tree where they see the Konoha Village. They entered in the village. In the morning at the Ninja Academy. All the students were chanting inside class. Iruka and a fourteen years old girl enters in class. "Students. Settle down." Iruka replied as the students paid attention to him. "Today. We have someone new this is Nico Jade she's going to be our student today. She is from Mahō village where she grew up at." Iruka replied as he introduced the girl towards the students. She has black long hair, brown eyes and light brown skin, the girl wore a black short kimono with black tights and boots. "Do you have anything you want to say?" Iruka asked. "Not very much a talkative person." Jade answered. "Alright you should have a seat and we will